The new shots that you have added to this are certainly an improvement and the trailer is looking better. It would have been good to have blogged both edits of the trailer to demonstrate your awareness of audience feedback and your hard work in producing 2 edits.
You trailer demonstrates proficiency in shooting material appropriate to task with controlled use of the camera and a wide of variety of shots being used throughout. However you demonstrate basic ability in terms of mise-en-scene as there are quite a few continuity errors. You show basic ability in terms of editing and use of sound. The trailer is quite hard to follow which will cause audiences to switch off whilst watching. In addition the textual detail at the end is lacking with no narration to aid audiences understanding.
The new shots that you have added to this are certainly an improvement and the trailer is looking better. It would have been good to have blogged both edits of the trailer to demonstrate your awareness of audience feedback and your hard work in producing 2 edits.
ReplyDeleteYou trailer demonstrates proficiency in shooting material appropriate to task with controlled use of the camera and a wide of variety of shots being used throughout. However you demonstrate basic ability in terms of mise-en-scene as there are quite a few continuity errors. You show basic ability in terms of editing and use of sound. The trailer is quite hard to follow which will cause audiences to switch off whilst watching. In addition the textual detail at the end is lacking with no narration to aid audiences understanding.
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